April 5, 2017
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Looking at Platitudes
Appetite for life possess
Believe that all is good
Choose fun, avoid excess
Decorum is understood
Evict all vulgar thoughts
Find the ways to live
Go and find the peaceful spots
Hatefulness outlive
Instant gratification shun
Just as joy you hold
Keep close the victories won
Live life free and bold
Measure out the troubled days
No ill thoughts retain
Open the heart to kinder ways
Pursuing vengeance refrain
Quiet the mind to find sleep
Refuse addictions grasp
Silence angry critique
Take another’s hand and clasp
Until the danger leaves
Virtue of patience cultivate
While planting tolerance’s seeds
Xenophobia abrogate
Yearn to learn all your life
Zest retain for the afterlifeSo this is an Abecedarian poem which is a poem of 26 lines where the letters of 1st word in each line are in alphabetical order starting with the letter A. The poem does not have to rhyme but I decided to do it anyway. I was working on a presentation to give to my coworkers on some new standard operating procedures - specifically safety processes. I read over some of my slides and realized it sounded like platitudes (a flat, dull, or trite remark, especially one uttered as if it were fresh or profound). It was a short step to this poem. I'm thinking that I should rename this to "proverbs" (a wise saying or precept) instead but that would be too much effort.
Comments (2)
A bright clever daughter .... eloquent...funny...good
This is my Valerie who could finish this all the way through the alphabet!
But I must finish it! It is required. I like closure and I have to finish what I start - even boring books like anything Steinbeck (especially Cannery Row)...