April 5, 2017

  • Looking at Platitudes

    Appetite for life possess
    Believe that all is good
    Choose fun, avoid excess
    Decorum is understood
    Evict all vulgar thoughts
    Find the ways to live
    Go and find the peaceful spots
    Hatefulness outlive
    Instant gratification shun
    Just as joy you hold
    Keep close the victories won
    Live life free and bold
    Measure out the troubled days
    No ill thoughts retain
    Open the heart to kinder ways
    Pursuing vengeance refrain
    Quiet the mind to find sleep
    Refuse addictions grasp
    Silence angry critique
    Take another’s hand and clasp
    Until the danger leaves
    Virtue of patience cultivate
    While planting tolerance’s seeds
    Xenophobia abrogate
    Yearn to learn all your life
    Zest retain for the afterlife

    So this is an Abecedarian poem which is a poem of 26 lines where the letters of 1st word in each line are in alphabetical order starting with the letter A. The poem does not have to rhyme but I decided to do it anyway. I was working on a presentation to give to my coworkers on some new standard operating procedures - specifically safety processes. I read over some of my slides and realized it sounded like platitudes (a flat, dull, or trite remark, especially one uttered as if it were fresh or profound). It was a short step to this poem. I'm thinking that I should rename this to "proverbs" (a wise saying or precept) instead but that would be too much effort.

Comments (2)

  • A bright clever daughter .... eloquent...funny...good

    This is my Valerie who could finish this all the way through the alphabet!

    • But I must finish it! It is required. I like closure and I have to finish what I start - even boring books like anything Steinbeck (especially Cannery Row)...

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