April 4, 2017
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Looking Dutiful
Use these eyes and heart
And my voice and will
To do my partFinish what I start
Keep my promises
Use these eyes and heartBuild not tear apart
Bind up wounds
To do my partEthics sharp dart
Seek your love
Use these eyes and heartRewards listed on a chart
My duty and pleasure
To do my partWhen Christian love demands
Take my voice and hands
To do my part
Use these eyes and heartThis is a villanelle. It is a poem with 2 rhyming sounds. The 1st and 3rd lines of the 1st stanza are rhyming refrains that alternate as the 3rd line in subsequent stanzas and form a couplet at the close. The poem is 19 lines long in 5 tercets (that is 3 line stanzas) with a concluding quatrain (4 line stanza).
It is Lent and that means I've been reading scripture every day. There is a reflection and a prayer along with a short description of the saint commemorated on the day. I've noticed a couple things about the saints that they all have in common. First they followed God's plan and not their own (this was not without struggle on their part) and secondly they didn't take the credit for successes - all their success, all the miracles, visions, etc. all belonged to God and it was by His power and love that they were able to save lives, build churches, cure the sick or drive out demons. They professed that they were weak but God was strong. Yep. That exactly.
Comments (12)
Yes, so true. I feel very weak sometimes. So glad He is strong for me!
The truth is that the strongest among us is weak as far as God's power goes....
Knowing God's plans for me is the difficult part.
Appreciate your explanations on the poems. I'm among the uneducated with poetry.
Glad the explanations help. I don't know too many people who figure out God's plan without a struggle...
Love the poem -- it says a lot!
Thanks Janet!! I try to make the poems emotionally accessible to most folks. Sometimes I'm lucky and other times not so much... Glad this one spoke to you!
Wonderful poem! Wonderful message. peace always
So nice to see you again! It has been a long time!!! I'm pleased that you like this one! Come visit more often...
Amen!
Thanks Gracia!
I really MUST share this with all my Christian friends.....good for people of any faith really!
Go right ahead!