March 21, 2017

  • Looking at the Cycle

    Tiny dots of eggs in neat rows
    Dark omens of the adolescent pupa
    Her wings crumpled and still

    Voraciously they scalloped leaf edges
    Growing caterpillar chaos escaped from
    Tiny dots of eggs in neat rows

    Each body fat gorging on rose leaves
    Becomes slow and muddy hardening
    Dark omens of the adolescent pupa

    The cocoon hides the miracle
    Until it bursts open to reveal
    Her wings crumpled and still

    There is a cycle to this life. In fact there is a cycle in everything we do and nearly everything that lives in this world. From the water cycle that dictates that water falls from the sky, is evaporated by the sun and then condenses and falls again to that complicated Krebs cycle that is the source of energy in living cells produced in the mitachondria! I like to think that here is also a cycle connected to forgiveness. It is where you need forgiveness and give forgiveness and then get forgiveness and so on and so on in an endless cycle. I wrote this casacade poem where there is a kind of cycle in that each line of the first stanza becomes the last line of subsequent stanzas. I used the Winter Scavenger Hunt 2017 prompt #16 - Include the life cycle of an insect.

Comments (6)

  • We talk of life cycles as being something very specific -- perhaps it should not be quite so specific!

    • Cycles and orbits and wheels that spin. It all goes around and yet we don't seem to be any farther along!

  • It's complicated. It gets more complicated the older we get and then another generation will replace us and realize the same thing. Makes me feel tired sometimes. :P

  • You are sure teaching me about poetry.

    I'd like to think there is a cycle of forgiveness, apparently not with my siblings.

    • I'm glad you are learning some new stuff. Writing poetry helps keep the mind nimble. You know April is National Poetry Month where everyone is encouraged to write a poem a day! So sorry your siblings haven't embraced forgiveness for others or for themselves.

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