September 24, 2016

  • Looking at Father

    The hospital gown was short on Liz accenting her now very long legs. The daughter she was rushing toward had turned into a woman of Amazonian proportions. For the first time in Liz’s life, her mother was stopped dead in her tracks. She took advantage of the situation by stretching her long arms out and reaching to embrace her tiny mother. Her mother evaded her hug. Turning on her heel and nearly knocking her father over, Mrs. Amanda Fuller fled the room. Liz was stunned. She turned to look at her father. He was looking at the door. Her father was trying to decide if he should go after his wife. He finally turned to look at Liz. A man of few words, he looked her over and his eyes softened. All he said to her was “Liz.” He walked to the bed and gave her the hug she needed. His first words were a statement “So tall.” He held her hand and then ran his palm over her bald head. With a wry smile he commented that without hair her eyes were more noticeable and beautiful. He asked about her job and her friends. He laughed and told her that her mother had bought some clothes that were not going to be suitable. He winked and said it would be good medicine if she spent some time returning them. Liz realized that her father was not unaware of the dynamic between her mother and herself. This was reassuring and also disturbing. She thought to herself that if he had known how domineering her mother was, why didn’t he intervene? Her father patted her hand, commenting on the softness of her palm, before excusing himself to make sure his wife wasn’t getting in trouble.

Comments (6)

  • Well I think I caught up now. I wish there was a notify system with Xanga, it would be easier to follow postings.

    The story of Liz is kind of kicking some similarities between my mother and I. Of course she is no longer alive but the memories are.

    • I agree that the new xanga has some issues - not knowing when one of your subscriptions posts is just one more. There are lots of mothers like Amanda Fuller. I was lucky that mine wasn't one of them...

  • Thank you for not making this a "happily ever after" story -- it never works out that way! But father did a great job of setting his priorities, greeting Liz appropriately, and then checking on Amanda.

    • I was trying to decide how to end it. At work, I had let one of my coworkers in on the story and she desperately wanted Liz to get better, fall in love and live happily ever after. I decided to let her live, let her fall into like, and the happily ever after is what she can go chase...

  • Well, if you ever DO put this into a novelette you could provide different endings and let the reader choose the one he or she likes best.....or make the reader just wonder! Glad you didn't pattern Liz's mom after your own mother! BTW, your little sister would like us to all come down to Tiki House for a family reunion! We need to all find a good time for this to happen! The last time was years ago for a birthday of mine if I'm not mistaken....15 years ago??? Neil had a broken arm at that time.

    • Has it been that long? I don't know if both boys could get away... I'll have to see what kind of vacation time everyone has....

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