MurisopsisA Different Point of View
About this Entry
Posted by: murisopsis

Visit murisopsis's Xanga Site

Original: 7/11/2009 7:39 AM
Views: 34
Comments: 14
eProps: 20

Read Comments
Post a Comment
Back to Your Xanga Site

Tags

Who recommended?


Saturday, July 11, 2009

Looking at my ADT Heart Security

 

We always talk about stealing kisses or stealing hearts. Love tends to take people by surprise. They spend so much time earnestly searching for it only to have it tap them on the shoulder from behind. Sadly for some, love is a hit and run. They are victims of accidental love or unfaithful love, and sometimes love is a thief. Hopefully the stolen kiss won't be missed and they leave the heart ransacked but unbroken. The unscrupulous lover steals it all and never looks back - a kind of Bernie Madoff lack of remorse. Sorry only that they couldn't get a better price...

Walking on crepe soles cat quiet

No breath sounds to warn of silent approach

No time to sound the alarm

Stealthy and pickpocket quick

Calculating, cold, cunning, clever

True thief but not heartless

            Anymore

 

 Posted 7/11/2009 7:39 AM - 34 Views - 20 eProps - 14 comments

Give eProps or Post a Comment

14 Comments

Visit slinky's Xanga Site!
Well done. I like the alliteration at the end (Calculating, cold, cunning, clever)
Posted 7/11/2009 7:49 AM by slinky Xanga True Member - reply

Visit Passionflwr86's Xanga Site!
Nice - and sadly, accurate.
Posted 7/11/2009 8:27 AM by Passionflwr86 Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit murisopsis's Xanga Site!

@slinky - Thanks. Alliteration is fun to do...


@Passionflwr86 - For some it is. Theives only really steal that which is kept under lock and key. How can something be stolen if it is offered freely?

Posted 7/11/2009 9:43 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

Visit adventofreason's Xanga Site!
yeah, what you said. excellent and tough to read, but true.  sadly true.
Posted 7/11/2009 9:57 AM by adventofreason Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit murisopsis's Xanga Site!
Thanks for the rec. I wish it were not so true for so many...
Posted 7/11/2009 10:25 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

Visit Edgebreak's Xanga Site!
Very nice.
Posted 7/11/2009 11:28 AM by Edgebreak - reply

Visit Dreams_of_a_Cowgirl's Xanga Site!
i actually wish this applied to my life... sounds easier...
Posted 7/11/2009 11:58 AM by Dreams_of_a_Cowgirl - reply

Visit Dezinerdreams's Xanga Site!
I love the way you have described this approach to love! And your reply to Passionflwr86 is even more profound, but I am afraid it is easier to say than reality.
Posted 7/11/2009 12:15 PM by Dezinerdreams Xanga True Member - reply

Visit windupherskirt's Xanga Site!
zap!
you just gotta stop astounding me with your prose and poetry ... how can so much talent and profound wisdom shine from just one person?
Posted 7/11/2009 2:30 PM by windupherskirt Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit Jillycarmel's Xanga Site!
sometimes it takes a death before we realized how much we love someone.
Posted 7/11/2009 4:37 PM by Jillycarmel Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit ANVRSADDAY's Xanga Site!
I never stole a kiss,
or got fresh with a miss,
I made a few gals hiss,
which made we want to _____.

A poem by frank
Posted 7/11/2009 6:54 PM by ANVRSADDAY Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit murisopsis's Xanga Site!

@windupherskirt - Oh thank-you! A rec and a mini and such compliments - thanks so much... All of my multiple personalities thank-you (J/K). hehehe My mother says I'm bright but she is biased.


@Jillycarmel - Yes, sometimes that is how it works sadly.


@ANVRSADDAY - You are so poetical! You can do it - in rhyme too!LOL

Posted 7/12/2009 12:29 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

Visit Gma_Joyce's Xanga Site!
Cupid is cruel
Love can sneak up like the fog.....on little cat's feet.....and you can add  sometimes "cruel" to your list: "Calculating, cold, cunning, and clever."
Posted 7/12/2009 8:15 PM by Gma_Joyce - reply

Visit murisopsis's Xanga Site!

@Gma_Joyce - LOL that mini is perfect for this post! Cruel oh so cruel. And once it is stolen, the thief sells it on e-Bay or pawns it...

Posted 7/12/2009 11:26 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply


Give eProps (?)
Post a Comment
Add Link | Preview HTML comment help 
  • Say it with Minis! (?)

Profile Pic:
Default  |  Choose »  (?)



Back to murisopsis's Xanga Site!
Note: your comment will appear in murisopsis's local time zone:
GMT -05:00 (Eastern Standard - US, Canada)