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Friday, July 10, 2009

Watching the Mint Harvest

 

Indiana has contributed a higher than average percent of young men and women to military service. The recruiters swarm like locust through the high schools. They are aided and abetted by the counselors, who steer them toward students that are easy pickings. The promises of education, vocational training, a steady pay check, and 3 squares a day comprise an offer they can't refuse. A number of boys had no greater dream than working the family farm. When the farm was foreclosed and the equipment auctioned their dreams died. They joined the Marines. Some decided that they would like to see the world. They enlisted in the Navy. Others when deprived of the joy of driving the combine, decided a tank would do as well and found a place in the Army. And then they came home. Some were quietly delivered, almost secretly, to funeral homes. Others were transported to hospitals and then to VA rehabilitation centers before they made their way home to their families. Then there were the ones that walked off planes and through terminals into the embrace of mothers, brothers, sisters and fathers. It reminds me of the mint fields that are scattered on the outskirts of town. There is a distinctive aroma when the plants are harvested, caused by the unavoidable damage to the fragile leaves. The returning soldiers give off a smell.  Many are saturated with it and it remains on their breath and in their dreams. The farm boys seem especially damaged. The land that was watered with the tears and sweat of their fathers calls to them but they have forgotten how to answer it.  

Fertile is the land

Farmers plant for fall harvest

Crops of earnest sons

Forces destroy tender shoots

Fighting wars devours lives

 

Soil dark and blood soaked

Spilled like seed from a weak seam

Gleaned from field and farm

Small green sprouts cut down too soon

Seeds unripe forever sterile

 

Bruised stem and leaves ooze

Breathe mint scent on summer night

Red blood makes rich dirt

Brokenness betrays beauty

Black loam begs bounty

 

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i love what you've done here. the juxtaposition of a tired soldier and refreshing mint makes evokes pleasure in the little things.
Posted 7/10/2009 6:13 AM by royal_diadem - reply

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Oh, my but this is a wonderful write - what is this form? Every stanza is a poem unto itself , and powerful in its observations;  the comparison between the boys and the mint harvest is perfect, if disturbing and tears at the heart. Great read.
Posted 7/10/2009 7:08 AM by BianchiStreet - reply

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where have all the flowers gone-remember that song?
Posted 7/10/2009 10:05 AM by Jillycarmel Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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So beautiful and heartbreaking. I love the last stanza...it speaks of hope  despite the pain and loss.

Posted 7/10/2009 10:33 AM by WakeUpLaughing - reply

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@royal_diadem - Thanks!


@BianchiStreet - They are the tanka form (5-7-5-7-7) but I decided to put a little alliteration in and start the 1,2,4,5 lines with the same letter - everything was fine until the last stanza. That one refused to be other than it was even after fussing so it remains broken 5-7-5-7-5. Glad you found it interesting. Thanks for the mini and the rec!


@Jillycarmel - Long time passing... yes I remember.


@WakeUpLaughing - Glad you liked it too! Thanks for the rec.

Posted 7/10/2009 12:08 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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if prose and poetry can be breathtaking ... yours is all that ... yep ...
Posted 7/10/2009 1:00 PM by windupherskirt Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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what a powerful juxtaposition. indeed. excellent!
Posted 7/10/2009 1:02 PM by MooncatBlue Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I am 75 and seen a few things and I don't think there is anything uglier on the planet than war.
Posted 7/10/2009 2:13 PM by ANVRSADDAY Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Your prose and poetry are heartache and breathtaking.  Outstanding.
Posted 7/10/2009 3:56 PM by Cynsjrl Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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@windupherskirt - Thank-you for the nice compliment! And the rec. There are times when a feeling must be given voice.


@MooncatBlue - I'm flattered, thank-you! It is so sad to see it happening. I can only hope for healing - for the soldiers, the families, the nation, and the land...


@ANVRSADDAY - I agree - war is awful. War born of greed is doubly so... Thanks for recommending this one.


@Cynsjrl - Thanks! I'm glad you liked it even if it was hard to read. Thank-you for the rec too.

Posted 7/10/2009 9:53 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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the pioneers of a warless world are the youth who refuse military service.
Posted 7/11/2009 2:52 AM by sonali137 - reply

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@sonali137 - Easier said than done.

Posted 7/11/2009 9:40 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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Val this was your best yet. I had a lump in my throat the whole time I read it. You have brought so much sensitivity in your prose and the poem is an Ode in itself.
Posted 7/11/2009 1:08 PM by ZSA_MD Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@ZSA_MD - It is sad. All the destruction of lives - and not just the ones that die. There are so many that have wounds physical and psychological.  It will be a pyrrhic victory (the war on terror) no matter the winner, we all lose.

Posted 7/11/2009 2:25 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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Val...When Josef Stalin first came to power in the 1920's, he ordered Nikolai Kondratieff, a Russian economist to study the capitalist system and find out what made it tick... Kondratieff discovered what has become known as the Kondratieff Wave, a well-known economic thesis... a 77-year cycle (give or take a couple of years) of major and/or minor wars within it, that are crucial to the success of our economic system... Wars (and the dead and wounded and broken they produce) are the necessary ingredients... For this conception, poor Nikolai was shipped off to Siberia and eventually killed... 




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PS: Beautiful post by the way...!
Posted 7/11/2009 7:33 PM by peterjamesmanos Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Great prose and poem, daughter, on this heartbreaking subject. You did it justice. I'm glad I raised daughters who love peace and hate war as much as I do. The only ones who profit are those who manufacture weapons and provide the supplies to perpetuate wars. If there were no money to be made.....maybe there'd be fewer wars.  I agree with Dr. Z.
Posted 7/11/2009 11:51 PM by Gma_Joyce - reply

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@peterjamesmanos - Stalin certainly tried to fertilize the soil with the blood and bones of the peasants. I think I learned about Kondratiev in my Russian History class...


@Gma_Joyce - Thanks mom! A rec and a mini too - I was just explaining to windupherskirt that you think I'm bright but are biased... No war is a dream of mine as well. 

Posted 7/12/2009 12:41 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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Val...You are certainly right... Stalin was a monster who killed many more people than Hitler and his cronies... 40 million souls is a fairly accurate count... He destroyed entire cultures between the Caucuses and Vladivostok in the '20's and '30s...


Old Nikolai pretty much had it right... K-Wave Cycle 1 = Between the American Revolution (major war) and the Civil War (major)...there were 2 conflicts (minor wars), the War of 1812 and the Mexican-American war (approx 79-80 years)... K-Wave Cycle 2 = Between the Civil War and WW2, we had WW1 (major), the Spanish-American War (minor) -testing ground for Nazi and US weaponry, Japan-China with the US fleet cutting off Japan's oil supply and US weaponing of Chiang leading up to WW2 and Pearl Harbor (major), approx 77-78 years... K-Wave Cycle 3 in progress) = the Korean War (minor), the Viet-nam War (major)... 50 thousand American boys dead and who knows how many lives destroyed, the Gulf War (minor) and Iraq-Afghanistan (major)... 59 years and counting till 2027-28?...Will he be right again?... He applied his theory to other so-called "free enterprise" economies throughout antiquity with relatively similar results...


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@peterjamesmanos - We'll just have to wait and see. Personally I'm hoping there will not be another major war. The sabre rattling from North Korea and the posturing from Iran give me uneasy dreams...

Posted 7/12/2009 5:14 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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@murisopsis - I would not worry too much about Iran... Most of their population is under 35... They'll do their thing on the mullahs... Same story in Israel... The kids will prevail over the ultra-orthodox, also the Palestinians are having a lot more babies... Chinese youngsters will also engineer a coup in N Korea eventually... but don't forget  NK's theorem...Wars are good for business

Posted 7/12/2009 5:56 PM by peterjamesmanos Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Val, how I missed this, I am not sure, but glad indeed that I found it.  Wow, it is beautiful and sad.  The pairing of these ideas is so very well done; delicate and rough at the same time.  Very, very well done.
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@adventofreason - Thanks! Have you been having fun somewhere, not on xanga?? I hadn't seen your footprints for awhile...

Posted 7/13/2009 11:26 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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@murisopsis - (She's been Facebooking. You didn't hear it from me.)

Posted 7/15/2009 4:09 PM by moptoplop Xanga True Member - reply

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@moptoplop - oh no! She has gone over to the dark side! I knew I felt a disturbance in the force. Too bad...

Posted 7/15/2009 5:26 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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