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Wednesday, July 08, 2009

Watching for Tornados

 

I remember summer storms. We lived in a one-story ranch built on a concrete slab - no basement. The prospect of a severe storm would make my Grandmother nervous and we would often travel the short distance to her house in the city. There we would amuse ourselves. On the other hand there were plenty of storms that were weathered at home. We all knew that the place to be was the bathroom in the tub. Thankfully we never had to take refuge there. The soil was mostly clay in our subdivision and the drainage was poor. (Probably why the farmer sold it to be developed - out in the middle of the countryside) After a good storm, the ditches that ran the length of the street through every front yard would be knee deep in rain water. The grass in our yard was never very lush except in the side yard down to the ditch. There it would grow green and soft. Since my father was not fond of mowing, he would wait until the majority of the yard was ready to mow before tackling the job. The side yard grass was always much longer than the rest of the yard. It became our version of the 'slip and slide' when the storm had passed and the water was high. The sharp tang of ozone in our nostrils and the peculiar smell of  wet earth would lure us outside in swimsuits. The sun would come out as would all the neighbor kids - barefoot and ready to play in the impromptu swimming holes. The storm fear dissipated with the first touch of toe to water. Forgotten was the thunder, lightening, high winds and the lurking danger of tornado.

 

Tossed high on the wind

The last remnants of autumn

Herald a summer storm

Leaves flip up in gusts

Like skirts revealing petticoats

In a paler shade of green

The warmth of the ground

Meets cold northern air

Clouds like rams in rut collide

Percussion rain pelts down

Buckshot raindrops pepper the ground

Parched, it drinks and petrichor releases

The twisting feather flutter

Of dried out leaves

Carried away in black cloud

Rises and falls, wheels and returns

Wind chased, hurried then caught

And driven this detritus and debris

Dips low to meet the muddied ground

Fingers form, a claw scratches the earth itch

Before rising to stab the sky in howling fury

Brown mulched leaves plastered

Against trunks made wet black

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yay!
Posted 7/8/2009 8:43 AM by apyus Xanga True Member - reply

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we get some good storms here in texas
Posted 7/8/2009 8:48 AM by Jillycarmel Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I remember playing in the rain filled ditches too.


Had a tornado go over our house once. Sea Hag and I were huddled in the basement. We didn't even lose a shingle from the roof. It touched down across the street though, ripped out a tree so big 2 men couldn't hold hands around it, 45 feet of sidewalk and fence, leaving a crater 7 feet deep.


Tornados are scary.

Posted 7/8/2009 8:48 AM by Bricker59 Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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We lived on the edge of town, and the tornado siren was basically in our front yard...it was just on the other side of the driveway on the fairground property. We definitely knew when it went off! It scared us right out of bed at night and rattled the windows. That thing was way scarier than my mom making us sit in the basement under a heavy table.

Posted 7/8/2009 9:48 AM by WakeUpLaughing - reply

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Good morning

We get a surprising number of tornados in Vermont (the number increases with global warming)  and they weather my dreams in times of stress...scary stuff. It's a wild world, for sure. Great poem....let the sun shine!


Posted 7/8/2009 9:59 AM by BianchiStreet - reply

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@Jillycarmel - I'm sure you do! Aren't they bigger in TX? lol


@Bricker59 - Rain water in ditches - the poor man's wading pool. No inflatable plastic covered in cartoon animals. A close encounter with a tornado can leave a lasting impression.


@WakeUpLaughing - We couldn't sit under the table (like the neighbors) because ours was a glass topped table.


@BianchiStreet - Sorry you could relate - I'm all for sunshine today too. Thanks for the rec.

Posted 7/8/2009 10:07 AM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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loved your words and the images they weave ... here in "tornado alley" the threat always lurks / survived a huge 'nader in '70 in the small town where I grew up / have great respect for them ... we're having an unseasonably cool front right this moment with dark fast-moving clouds, periodic torrents of rain and wind ... dawg is quivering ...
Posted 7/8/2009 10:31 AM by windupherskirt Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@windupherskirt - Been through my share too. Summer has a dark side.... Glad you like the poem and thanks for the rec!

Posted 7/8/2009 12:18 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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I'm in the Tornado belt as well. About 7 years ago one hit five minutes down the road from us. It ripped, crumbled  killed and maimed many things and people. I shake in my shoes just thinking about the power it beholds.  I lived through Hurricane Andrew in Florida; catagory 5. I watched in terrifying awe.   Mother nature knows just how to whip us into submission, doesn't she?, ha.


Great poem!

Posted 7/8/2009 1:47 PM by Cynsjrl Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I have been here in the midwest since I came to the States, and only twice have come close to one. There was one about a mile down the road, ripped through the swimclub and took the roof off and emptied the swimming pools, and the other one about half hour ago where a local college had a lot of damage.


Be safe.

Posted 7/8/2009 3:47 PM by ZSA_MD Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Love this prose(?). It was very nicely written. We lived 20 years in the mid-west and I handle tornado losses since I was in claims management--even one oil spill for over a month. Tornadoes are incredibly destructive. I was always surprised that few to none were killed with the claims that I handled.

RYC I will suggests carrots and peas to Norma for Rusty. He has had special dog treats, but Auntie is giving him scraps off her plate and bread. lol So we all had a meeting. Norma is going to watch all of us like a hawk.

Have a very nice day,

blessings

frank
Posted 7/8/2009 4:25 PM by ANVRSADDAY Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@Cynsjrl - We had one dance down the walking path behind our house - we lost a tree, had a little fence damage and a piece of trim come loose... Much less than what others suffered.


@ZSA_MD - Tis the season. You stay safe too!


@ANVRSADDAY - I imagine in insurance you would see a lot of the after effects... The warning sirens, doppler radar and common sense make it easier to avoid loss of life. Sad that some don't heed the warnings.

Posted 7/8/2009 5:29 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply

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I learned recently that more than 80% of reported tornadoes occur in the U.S.


Here in Texas, I have seen my fair share...from a great, great distance. They terrify me.


The storm itself, though---that I am in love with.

Posted 7/8/2009 9:22 PM by Krissy_Cole Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I have never witnessed a tornado but the poem made me feel like one was coming,I looked out the window!
Posted 7/8/2009 11:05 PM by seedsower Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Living in tornado alley, I have seen and been through my share of bad storms.  And for the same reasons (clay soil), most of us don't have basements around here either.  Great poem.  Now, my friend, I will admit I had to Google petrichor  and was delighted at the definition on Wiki.  "Stone Ichor"   In mythology, the blood of the gods, in common use, the smell of rain on the dry earth.  Amazing word . . . I love it.
Posted 7/9/2009 11:57 AM by adventofreason Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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@Krissy_Cole - scary stuff but fascinating - like a train wreck - you just can't look away.


@seedsower - I too get nervous when the weather changes so rapidly - so I'm nervous all the time.


@adventofreason - I too like this word - glad you enjoyed!

Posted 7/9/2009 12:08 PM by murisopsis Xanga True Member - reply


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